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Did the setting interest you, and did the descriptions seem vivid and real to you?

Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? If not, why not?

Was there a point at which you felt the story started to lag or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly?

Were there any parts that confused you? Or even frustrated or annoyed you? Which parts, and why?

Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in time sequences, places, character details, or other details?

Did you feel there was too much description or exposition? Not enough? Maybe too much dialogue in parts?

Was there enough conflict, tension, and intrigue to keep your interest?

Was the ending satisfying? Believable? Did you see that coming?

Any other comments about "When Embers End?"

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this book that isn’t even released yet. Not to mention offering feedback! You’re the best. Really, for real. You’re amazing. Thank you for caring.

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